Hi there bloggers
this week I have been doing school work at home because of covid lately
we've all been staying at home but it doesn't mean we can't do school work so
I write a story I hope you like it but it is short
Long ago a railway station was busy all the employees were busy as a bee
the train took you anywhere you wanted to go but there was a evil witch
living in a small tiny house she was walking on the leaves crunch crunch
went the leaves. she saw the track for the railway station and she wanted to
curse the land so she made vines all around the track so if anyone stepped
on the track the vines would turn them into vines.
I hope you liked it comment if you did
Hello Niall, well done i have seen your work it is great.
ReplyDeleteHi Niall,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your writing. That witch certainly sounds a bit evil! I like your line 'the employees were as busy as bees'. Don't forget next time to highlight all your language features that we have been learning. A couple of things to think about, make sure you double check your punctuation and capital letters - read over what you have written to make edits, and perhaps you can put your writing on a slide so you could have added some images.
Miss Roberts